2023年北京中考英语书面表达

38. 从下面两个题目中任选一题, 根据所给提示, 完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
38. 假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。
提示词语：invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library
提示问题：What activity do you plan to do? 
Why do you want to organize this activity? 
When and where will you have this activity? 
Dear Peter, 
How is everything going? 
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Hope to hear from you soon. 
Yours, 
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter, 
How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join us. As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. I believe we all will have a great time.
Hope to hear from you soon. 
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文 一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题中包含的关键信息，写邮件告诉Peter活动内容、意义及安排。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写电子邮件的目的是邀请Peter参加活动；
第二步，介绍计划什么活动、组织这一活动的原因及具体安排；
第三步，期待收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②join sb. 加入某人
③stop ... from doing sth. 阻止……做某事
[高分句型]
①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together.（as引导原因状语从句）
②I believe we all will have a great time.（省略that的宾语从句）
题目②
39. 同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。
假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加过的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。
提示词语：take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress
提示问题：What club did you join? 
What did you do in the club? 
What have you learned from the experience? 
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【答案】例文：
I have been in the basketball club for three years. We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams. During the three years, my skill of playing basketball improved a lot. And I also made a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. I will keep playing and try to be good at it.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题涉及的关键信息，写短文谈谈自己参加过的社团、这个社团的活动内容及你考生的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明参加了什么社团；
第二步，介绍社团中的活动；
第三步，谈谈从社团活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②on the weekend 在周末
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
④be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams.（and连接表等同关系的并列句）