2023年河南中考英语书面表达

为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。

写作要求：1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受；

2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由；

3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；

4) 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：shuttlecock exercises 毽子操；badminton 羽毛球；rope skipping 跳绳

The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.               

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【答案】例文

The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.

In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.

Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出话题；

第二步，介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受；

第三步，介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由。

[亮点词汇]

①walk out of走出

②in my opinion依我来看

③different kinds of不同种类的

[高分句型]

①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句)

②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句)