2021年天津市中考英语书面表达

假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。

(1)两周前同学王红伤了左腿。

(2)王红上下楼很困难, 但想来学校上课。

(3)校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。

(4)你们帮助王红(如买午饭等)。

(5)你认为……

要求:

(1)词数: 80~100 个。

(2)开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。

Dear Tom,

How are you? I have a moving story to tell you.

 

Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

 

答案与提示

写作提示

1.体裁:应用文(内容以叙事为主)。

2.人称:主体人称为第三人称。

3.时态:以一般过去时为主。

4.要点:1)描述出同学王红的受伤经过;

2)写出王红受伤后的行为;

3)校长和同学们在知道她受伤后的表现;

4)你的想法或感触。

参考范文

Dear Tom, 

How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. 

Two weeks ago, my classmate Wang Hong had an accident on the way home. A car hit her and hurt her left leg when she was crossing the road. It was hard for her to get up and down the stairs but she still wanted to go back to school. When our headmaster knew about it, he asked us to move our class from the fourth floor to the first floor. Each of us tried our best to help her.We took turns to buy her lunch, and help her to get up and down the stairs.

To this day, I think this matter is still deeply touching. There are many moving things in our life. They make our life colorful and meaningful.

Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. 

Yours,

Li Hua